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Well, I like this begining of a story and I'd like to know if you'd want me to continue it. I've got some ideas, but if no one wants it... Well, I'll just abandon it.
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Ok, I'm not deleting this story since there are a few more chapters to it:
Folowing chapter:[link]
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~3GrayAngel3 Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely piece, a great beginning, I can't wait to read the rest of this. But like Annuski said you do tend to wonder from the main part of the story.
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~KittyPwa Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, that tends to happen to me.
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~Annuski Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
This is amazing, although you occasionally let yourself wonder too far off from the story. I don't think you should abandon it, but then again I dont think any story should ever be abandoned =)
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